Saturday, March 5, 2011

A LOVE SONG




Like  a whirlwind  you  came,
For  an  eternity  you  stayed.
Like  a lovelorn  lass,
I  kept  sinking
Deeper  and  deeper
Until ,
I  drowned  in  your  love,
I  reached  to  the  centre,
Where  love  absolute,
Held  it’s  axis.
I clung  to  it
Whirlwind’s  don’t  stay  ,
But   you  did.
And  I  still kept  drowning,
Deeper and  deeper I  did.
I  saw  the  unimaginable,
I felt  the  absolute,
I saw  the  supernatural,
Even  beyond it.
You  were  the  galaxy ,
I was  the  star  in  it.
You  were  the  song,
I was  the  music in  it.
You  were  the  soul
I was  the life  in it
You  were the   love
I   had  always  wanted
You  were  my  night,
You  were  my  day.
I   held  my  breath,
 You  stole  away.
We  are the images 
That  merge  into  one
Into  the minds
We  coalesce  again
We are  the souls
That  sing  in unision
The  happy  songs 
Of  love  everlasting
And  since the  day  you  came
Like  a  whirlwind  in  my  life
I  wonder  if  you  have  ever  known
That  nothing has  been  more  beautiful
As  loving  you!

4 comments:

  1. It brings out the beauty which held somewhere inside u or i say u r full of love.
    It reminds romanticism.

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  2. beautifully written. the narrator trying to be a part of the system of her beloved, finally succeeds, they become one.

    "How can we know the dancer from the dance?"

    I can also see a sufi side to it. this can be seen as a song of unison with the almighty himself.

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  3. thanx a ton for the appreciation...u tuk ur tym n gave d best of interpretation..

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