Like a whirlwind you came,
For an eternity you stayed.
Like a lovelorn lass,
I kept sinking
Deeper and deeper
Until ,
I drowned in your love,
I reached to the centre,
Where love absolute,
Held it’s axis.
I clung to it
Whirlwind’s don’t stay ,
But you did.
And I still kept drowning,
Deeper and deeper I did.
I saw the unimaginable,
I felt the absolute,
I saw the supernatural,
Even beyond it.
You were the galaxy ,
I was the star in it.
You were the song,
I was the music in it.
You were the soul
I was the life in it
You were the love
I had always wanted
You were my night,
You were my day.
I held my breath,
You stole away.
We are the images
That merge into one
Into the minds
We coalesce again
We are the souls
That sing in unision
The happy songs
Of love everlasting
And since the day you came
Like a whirlwind in my life
I wonder if you have ever known
That nothing has been more beautiful
As loving you!
drowned
ReplyDeleteIt brings out the beauty which held somewhere inside u or i say u r full of love.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds romanticism.
beautifully written. the narrator trying to be a part of the system of her beloved, finally succeeds, they become one.
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I can also see a sufi side to it. this can be seen as a song of unison with the almighty himself.
thanx a ton for the appreciation...u tuk ur tym n gave d best of interpretation..
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